YOUR BILL IS TO BE COMPLETED BY THE END OF CLASS TODAY!
Reminders/Reflections after reviewing bills:
- No personal pronouns in bills; delete all uses of I, you, we, my, our, etc.
- Do not abbreviate proper names/places or use contractions.
- Now you can put bill numbers on bill (6th hour only)
- Review sample bill for: capitalization, tabbing, extra/not enough spaces, section numbering
- Review rubrics to see how many examples I want in each section; more than likely, you need more detail and more professional language.
- Whereas (Clause 1): clearly discusses importance of bill
- Whereas (Clause 2): clearly discusses at least two problems/harms
- Whereas (Clause 3): clearly discusses at least one reason why the bill hasn't already passed
- Whereas (Clause 4): clearly discusses at least two benefits after passing your bill
- Section I: clearly discusses specifics of bill
- Section 2: gives specific date for passing bill (administration optional)
- Section 3: clearly discusses who will enforce the bill (penalties optional)
- Section 4: clearly discusses how much this will cost and what budget the money will come from (even if you don't think it will cost anything)
- Bibliography / 3 sources minimum:
- 10 points - Students select a credible source. The citation is formatted appropriately using APA or MLA (easybib). Students complete the annotation with 5 or more sentences summarizing the source, not copying and pasting from the website.
- 7.5 points - Students select a source that lacks some credibility. The citation is formatted; however, there are mistakes with APA or MLA. Students complete the 4-5 sentences. Students do not copy straight from the source, but they put the material in their own words.
- 5 points - Students select a source that lacks credibility. The citation is not properly formatted using APA or MLA. Students do not complete the 4-5 summary of the source, and/or they just copy and paste from the source.
- Outline
- Do not just copy and paste from bill. The outline should be an explanation.
- Put three sources into bill using in-text citation format.
- According to the National Education Association...
- or "... school is a good thing" (NEA, 2010).
- Complete each section.
Here is a list of topics by class.